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photoblog image in my kitchen....

in my kitchen....

my entry for Simons challenge....

 

Petra

in my kitchen....

my entry for Simons challenge....

 

Petra

comments (11)

  • Kay
  • 28 Jun 2007, 03:50
Very good photo, Petra. It's dramatic. And artsy. Just the type of picture that I like. I hope you win the challenge!
Petra: Thanks Kaysmile
  • paul
  • 28 Jun 2007, 11:32
your kitchen looks like a scary place smile i like these grainy shots of yours
Petra: Yep...the combination of me and a kitchen can be very dangerous..lol
  • Louis
  • South Africa
  • 28 Jun 2007, 11:46
Seriously excellent Petra. With shadows and all.
Petra: Thank you very much Louissmile
  • Ginnie
  • Atlanta, GA, United States
  • 28 Jun 2007, 12:39
Aha! I think I just saw someone else's kitchen challenge. Hmmm. Don't know about Simon or his challenge.

Two candles. Are you waiting for someone/something, Petra? Are you dreaming/meditating.

As we say here in Georgia (big Country genre with fans of Faith Hill), "Just Breathe!"
Petra: Was waiting for the microwave to do "ping" and i could start eating my dinner on the floor....i like eating at candle light...lol
  • nev
  • Australia
  • 28 Jun 2007, 13:48
Love the mood in this shot Petra. Forget the microwave. Get a kerosene powered bain marie and start boiling your food.
Petra: lol Neil....fantastic idea grin
Good shot; just enough light for a distinct image.
Petra: Thanks Wimsmile
  • BeakerSt
  • Shutterchance
  • 28 Jun 2007, 19:09
Couldn't possibly comment...just yet wink
Petra: Oh....pfffffffffffffff
Another lovely low light shot. Mike
Petra: Thanks Mike!
very nice, both the concept and the execution, I love it
Petra: Thanks Patrick!!
you look like a hostage, waiting for rescue. Are you well treated?
Petra: lol yeah treatment was okay...smile
  • BeakerSt
  • Shutterchance
  • 24 Jul 2007, 00:57
Submitted against June's Challenge at BeakerSt

Relevance and Creativity
Well it's definitely in the kitchen, (note to Mal) and it's creative in a moody way. I like it although you look sad. Scores 8

Overall Impact
It's very very sad and lonely looking. It presents a lot of emotion and is therefore quite dramatic, scores 8

Composition
Just one niggle, it's meant to be sombre and sad and draw you in to the emotion of the shot…then I see the two bright spots on the far right which make me go 'oh I wonder what that is…"" I am picky but they could have been cloned out and the viewer would then have been drawn into the shot a little better. Scores 7

Quality of Image
Nice and gritty and emotional. Scores 8

Total 31/40 (4th equal)

Full list of entries on BeakerSt July 24th

Thanks for taking part Petra, I hope you find the comments constructive and fair but let me know if not as it is just my opinion! Simon
Petra: Thanks again for all the effort in this challenge Simon, its much appreciated!! The comments are very constructive (as always...lol) and i am looking forward to the next challenge!
ps i am very happy with this scoresmile
Petra

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